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				|  Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2025 12:18 am    Post subject: |   |  
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				| Entropic convergence - First off, you list it as a Control and Alter power.  But from the description, I think it's more of a Control, Sense, and Alter power.  Next, given its destructive effects, I believe darkshear strike is a prerequisite.  But since this is a group ritual, I believe link is also a prerequisite.  Finally, the skill difficulties need to be detailed. 
 
 Path of Ruin - The description of the power suggests it affects matter.  You made it sound like a more powerful version of oblivion touch.  That would make it a Control, Sense, and Alter power.  But the effect suggests it's using darksight to foresee the target's entropic future.  So that would make it a Control and Sense power.  Also, the description suggests that shatterpoint sense might be a prerequisite as well.  This needs further consideration.
 
 
 Entropic Projection - I believe collapse will would be a prerequisite for this power.
 
 
 Corrupt Knowledge - It seems to combine memory wipe with electronic manipulation.  That would make it Control, Sense, and Alter power.  Perhaps you should change the difficulties - using it against machines is a certain difficulty.  Using it against people is a different level of difficulty.
 
 
 Drain Energy - This has already been listed in the Force Powers PDF.  But this version also targets people.  So the prerequisites should cover both options.  And what I said before about the difficulties applies here too.
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