From: George Aranda <tarc_say@y...>
Date: Mon Sep 4, 2000 10:23pm
Subject: Re: NPCs for Review
Interesting NPC, glad you edited it. It was seriously munchy, but still a few questions.
| Name: Corr Terek Species: Human Gender: Male Age: 21 |
STR: 5D (due to increased gravity & combat training) Swimming: 3D (question - how is swimming lower than the attribute?) KNO: 4D Languages: 3D Cultures: 2D (question - how are languages and culture lower than KNO?)
| MEC: 4D Starfighter Ops: 6D (Rebel Alliance training) Repulsorlift Ops: 5D Beast Riding: 8D (also due to low-tech background) |
OK. Now, I am wondering if it is necessary for this character to have such a high attribute in Mechanical? He only has 3 skills in it (all above proffessional standard) so it would be worth putting this down to 3d or even 2d+2. He can't be *great* at everything and I think this attribute could be reduced.
Also, considering he has 6d in his Starfighter Ops (I would imagine he only started flying fighters when he joined the Alliance) I would think he would be older than 21. Considering the number of skills this guy has, he would at least have to be 5 years older than he is. Unless you have some particular reason for him being so young.
| TEC: 3D Starfighter Repair: 4D |
Again, this attribute could even be lower than it is. Just for the sake of a rounded character.
| Special Abilities: Absorb/Dissipate Energy, Lightsaber Combat, Telekinesis, Enhance Attribute, Empower Weapon, Force Bolt, Projective Telepathy, Receptive Telepathy, Life Bond, Life Sense, Danger Sense, Combat Sense, Warp Matter, Affect Mind, Short Term Memory Enhancement, Concentration, Project Force, Strengthen Material, Telekinetic Kill, Empower Self, The Cleansing, Force Bolt. Control: 6D Alter: 4D Sense: 5D |
Again, he's learned quite a bit for a 21 year old. I would personally reduce his CSA, or increase his age to reflect the sheer amount of time it would take to learn all these things. Even if he studied everything every hour of everyday, I have difficulty believing someone could learn ALL this. But that's just me. :) Also, has he got any DSPs? There's a few powers that would lend themselves to DSPs.
| Equipment: Lightsaber (5D), heavy blaster (5D), two sets of clothing, datapad, Karr Mallux's journal, 200,000 credits in various accounts, wedding ring. |
200,000 credits? You might wanna explain how he got that. Not to me, but to characters
who would care about an NPC having this much.
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